tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35892775.post5740152352990454213..comments2024-01-04T04:39:31.208-08:00Comments on Meanwhile...: Rocky and LimalcoJOJOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12362522805988503279noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35892775.post-17263045785705030722019-07-03T09:58:39.772-07:002019-07-03T09:58:39.772-07:00Thank you! :)Thank you! :)malcoJOJOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12362522805988503279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35892775.post-87084889936742606052019-07-02T21:22:40.882-07:002019-07-02T21:22:40.882-07:00Ԍood article! We are linking to this particularly ...Ԍood article! We are linking to this particularly great article on ourr sіte.<br /><br />Keep up tһe great writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35892775.post-55663834639875817682009-03-30T08:59:00.000-07:002009-03-30T08:59:00.000-07:00This is awesome!!! I love that twist!!! I smiled...This is awesome!!! I love that twist!!! I smiled at the end, terrific Malco! You do have a talent...<BR/><BR/>I would change the phrase "stood up" to "got up" in the 18th paragraph, 2nd sentence...that would be a "critique" though, only b/c its a human term and dogs dont stand up. but if you say "got up", no one would be the wiser...<BR/><BR/>i read and re-read and re-read and have more comments, but only if you want them--but you are a terrific writer and everything I have read so far, i can see in a short story/anthology of some kind...its truly amazing.<BR/><BR/>maybe i should send some of mine to you and you can critique?Carrie Glassmeyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03537616217421876813noreply@blogger.com